My magical room

If  I  had a magical room it would have a food machine and it would do anything I told it to do.

It would have a sunroof  and a  balcony .It would be able to talk and it would have a arcade.

It would also have robotic servants come out of the walls and it would have a pool.

My room would have a movie theater and it would have candy machines that you don’t have to pay for.

My room would have security cameras and my bed  could fly.

I would have a computer so I could see everything in the world and what’s happening the world.

Category: 3rd grade, Writing
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2 Responses
  1. avatar Stefani Lesser says:


    I absolutely loved your responses because they were so creative! Can I please come to your magical room?

    Please be sure and capitalize the words in your title.

    Keep writing!
    Mrs. Lesser 🙂

  2. avatar Jeremy says:

    Very creative. Sounds like a really neat room. I especially like the part about the arcade and the candy machine you don’t have to pay for. You probably would never want to leave…

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