A time I lost something special

A time I lost something special to me was when my dog died. My dog died because he had aches.

Another time I lost something special was when my goldfish died when it died I was very sad.

Category: 3rd grade, Writing
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  1. avatar Stefani Lesser says:

    Madelyn,

    Your post was honest, but sad. I have had a lot of pets and I am always sad when they die, but I realize that this is part of life.

    Take a look at your last sentence and add punctuation. Also, try capitalizing the words in your title.

    Keep writing!
    Mrs. Lesser 馃檪

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