This week, our assignment was to write a blog post on which blog post is the best of the best. To determine which one is the best, we had to use our blogging rubric that Mrs. Tolisano gave us. It helped by telling us whether we we were a beginner, capable, accomplished, or expert. I choose my Purim post. I believe it is my best because it has many pieces of multi media, meaning pictures, and links. I think also that the quality of writing is very good, and as Mrs. Tolisano would say, “you could hear voice when you are reading.” In addition there was there were no spelling or grammar errors. That is why I think this post is the best of MY best on my blog all year. Tell me. What do you think abotu my Purim post.
Posted on March 14, 2012
Purim is a “Jewish” holiday, where everyone is happy! I feel that purim is a very memorable holiday, and here is the story of why I think that (the story of Purim)…………..
…………One day, in a far away land called Shushan, there lived a king, king Achashverosh. King Achashverosh did not want to rule his kingdom alone, so he set along to find a partner for he would spend the rest of his life with. He did find a lovely woman who he wished to marry. He, well, married her, and they lived happily ever after…but thats not the THE END.
King Achashverosh liked to show his beautiful wife off, so he had always planned a bunch of parties and banquets, for he would show off his wife, Vashti. But one day, his lovely Vashti did not want to put up with this “oh Vashti, come here” and all these other orders from the king, for she was the queen, and she can do her own thing. So she refused to go to the next party King A. would have. King A. grew very angry and huffy, and banished (not so) Queen Vashti out of his kingdom.
After Queen Vashti left, King A. felt very lonely, and needed someone to fulfill his loneliness. Since his first marriage didn’t go so well, he chose to let his advisor, Haman (rash rash rash) to pick out a woman who was the right person for him, for Haman knew king A. very well. Haman picked out a woman who he thought was perfect for King A. Her name is Esther.
Meanwhile, Haman had another plan. Haman wanted to kill the jews, because when Haman was walking by, Mordechi (Esther’s Uncle) did not bow, for he was a jew, and jews only bow down to G!D. Haman got furious, and decided he wanted to kill all of the jews.
(this is me talking) “Lets see what King A has to say about that”.
Unlike Vashti, Esther would go to all of his parties, and all of his banquets, and so on, but there was one detail about this young woman that king A. did not know. Esther wasJewish! Esther knew that Vashti was kicked out of the kingdom because she disobeyed the king, so Esther did not want to go through the trouble Vashti did.
Esther felt so bad, for her uncle had told her not to reveal she is Jewish, so she fasted for three days, thinking about a way to tell king A.in a nice and pleasant way. Queen Esther told the king to set up a banquet, and Esther would tell the king about her secret.
On the day of the lovely banquet, Esther was dressed up all nice, and she had straitened her hair, and so on. Esther was very nervous. She had butterflies in her stomach. Esther was not looking forward to this!
When the king announced that the banquet had started, and that Queen Esther had something to say, Esther started shaking. She took a deep breath, and let it out, and then walked up to where the king was standing, eying her uncle. “I, I am a Jew, and I know I’m not supposed to be saying this, but I had to, because Haman wants to kill all of my people, and nobody did anything wrong. But King A, you won’t kill me, or my people will you?” asked Esther. “No way! I had nothing to do with this, in fact I don’t even know how this came up!” explained King A, starring at Haman. “I have not approved of this,” king A. said. Achashverosh said that instead of Mordichi being hung, Haman shall be hung!
Basically, Mordichi saves the day, and the Jews are the winner! That is the story of Purim!
Here is a picture of a boy dressing up as Pooh Bear for Purim!

http://www.flickr.com/photos/potashman/111649781/
I hope you agree with me! If there are any other posts you think are really good, comment, prove me wrong! Hee hee!








