Post of the Week

Every week I would like to showcase a student’s post from their personal blog.
This week the post of the week is Jake’s.
The students were asked to write about a memorable vacation and use time-order words in their description. Here is Jake’s post. Great job!
This summer, I went to Kennedy Space Center and Lion Country Safari with my grandparents. First I went to Lion Country Safari. Lion Country is a drive-in zoo when YOU are the ones caged in. The animals aren’t in cages, except for the lions. LCS is in West Palm Beach. Next, we got a hotel in Titusville.

The next day, my grandfather and I went to Kennedy Space Center. My grandmother decided to stay in bed instead of going to KSC. I wanted to go to see alot of things. I wore my grandfather out! When we got back to the hotel, I played on the computer before going to a buffet for dinner. After dinner, we watched some TV and I played on the computer some more before going to bed.

I enjoyed going alot, and I thank my grandparents for taking me!

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3 Responses to Post of the Week

  1. avatar Morah Liat says:

    I really enjoyed reading about your vacation. I have never heard of the Lion Country Safari. It sounds like an interesting place. You are really lucky that your grandparents take you on such great vacations.

  2. Jake,
    Thank you for sharing your adventures with us. My students really enjoyed your post, especially the idea of the open zoo safari. Our favorite sentence in your post was, “Lion Country is a drive-in zoo when YOU are the ones caged in”. You express yourself very well. Keep up the great work!

    Miss. deVries and the Grade 5 Delvers

  3. avatar Kimberley says:

    Hi Jake,

    I love buffets because you can eat as much as you want. I was just wondering what was you favourite animal at the Zoo?

    See you,
    Kimberley

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